Illustrating a Children’s Story, Part 3

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This is part three in my series of posts about illustrating the Three Little Pigs. Please also read:




Some decisions

The whole point of this entire project is to create a promotional piece to send to children’s book publishers. With this goal in mind, I think there are several skills that should be showcased clearly:

  • CHARACTER – Unique design, consistency, and clarity of expression.

  • COMPOSITION – The ability to put a story in book form.

  • NARRATIVE – Visually telling a story that is clear and succinct.

  • STYLE – What makes you different from all the other illustrators out there.

Some people have suggested that I play around with the story a bit, but I’ve decided to keep my version of the tale pretty traditional. Sure, it would be fun, but my goal is not to show how wacky I can be, but to highlight the skills I’ve listed above. The story will still be new and fresh IF my efforts are solid.

A few more character designs

When I draw pigs, I have a tendency to make simple round heads and round bodies. In the brainstorming stage, I discovered a different style that I liked better, using a single shape for the entire body. This is a lot more flexible, making it easier to create different and cuter pig characters.

For the wolf, I struggled a bit for a while. With a little experimentation and good feedback, I was able to come up with a general design that I liked. He’s skinny and sleazy, and looks somewhat like a cross between a rat and a dog. Also, I received a comment the other day that my animals tend to look too Disney-ish – a critique that I’ve gotten before – and I thought that this design was a nice and quirky way to go.

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Thumbnails

Because I am using this series of illustrations as a promotional piece, I am limiting the story to merely eight pages. Anything more than that will be too daunting and not worth the time. By keeping the story small, I won’t have to do an enormous amount of painting, and the booklet will be easy to print and put together.

Mapping out the story in such a short amount of space was a lot harder than I expected. Having a really popular story that virtually everybody knows helps a lot. I drew lots and lots of thumbnails, many of which were very simple and messy. But at this point, I am only worried about myself being able to decipher them.

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Rough Layout

After getting a few ideas down, I went ahead and made more detailed thumbnails. This is the layout that I have so far.

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It’s a good starting point, and I’m enjoying some of the expressions and designs, but I will most likely be tweaking it some more. Please leave a comment if you have any suggestions. If you don’t think I am highlighting any of my skills/goals strongly enough, please let me know!


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5 Responses to Illustrating a Children’s Story, Part 3

  1. deb johnson says:

    I love what you’re doing with the illustrating posts. I like the new style of pigs you’ve created…very nice. The thumbnails are detailed enough..lots of movement and expression. Great work, Dani…

  2. Kristin says:

    Your biggest skill is in color, closely followed by line (in my opinion, anyway.) I suspect the image of the wolf by himself is going to have some fun colors going on =). I think that your layouts are supporting that strength, but I do have some suggestions.

    The straw house really dwarfs the Big Bad Wolf. The balance of power in the story is towards the wolf at that point, but he isn’t visually dominant here (although I do enjoy the composition.) Maybe push the wolf closer to the camera, or take a different camera angle? I love the wolf’s design and the layout where the pig and the house are being blown down. I liked the pig’s pose in the rough, with his tail toward the viewer, better than the second. Tipped-over pigs are just fun. I really like the pig vignette with the “Ohmigosh, where’d my house go?” expression. Can’t wait to see these in color.

  3. Hey Dani,

    I just took a look at you blog and wanted to tell you: it’s amazing. I watched the tutorial-videos and expecially liked the dragon-portrait and the xmas-cats. I felt like coloring some illustrations of mine by using the computer. And it worked out :)
    By the way, I’m an illustrator from Germany and just linked your blog on mine (http://fritz-news.blogspot.com).

    So I’d be glad to read more from you and about your illustrations.
    Have a good one,
    Johanna

  4. platypotamus says:

    just popping in to say thanks for the series of posts. loving those thumbnails, too.

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